Just because I am working hard on edits for my last novel does not mean I was able to stop myself from plotting and jotting down ideas for my next. I have been playing around with the opening lines for a week or so, this is my most recent attempt.
How do you know if what you find is real if you’re not looking for it? The question didn’t make sense to her, it frightened her. Before she agreed to the end, she had to find the beginning.
Let me know your thoughts.
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Intriguing, thought-provoking. I’d love to see more of these 🙂 All the best!
The ideas just keep coming–Usually what you find that has not been looked for is more real because it’s not tainted with the twiunge of desire.>KB
It is good to find the beginning so that she can edit it according to your message
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Love that for an opening line. It hints at both a mystery and a little suspense. 🙂