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At dawn it begins,
Unknowingly I start,
Anticipation.
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Lost in the journey,
Challenges posed at each step,
Acceptance of fate.
~
Fearlessly driving,
The outcome is daring you,
Adventure rewards.
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~~~~~~~~~~~~~~
At dawn it begins,
Unknowingly I start,
Anticipation.
~
Lost in the journey,
Challenges posed at each step,
Acceptance of fate.
~
Fearlessly driving,
The outcome is daring you,
Adventure rewards.
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HIKE. BIKE. DRINK.
College Level Drinking, Elementary Level Writing
A Poet's Journey by Manivillie Kanagasabapathy
An introvert's guide to the human experience
The poetically puts into perspective all of our projects, one of which I just posted about.
I had to swing by and see what you meant, great post!
I believe that Fate drives my life. Where i have freedom of choice; I believe that some life decisions are “preordained”. I do not believe that “true love” is a decision; it is FATE. I did not decide one day to love. It should only be that easy. It was fate that I met him.
This is just so…perfect. It has everything- great thought, flow. Love it.
I can see a prose or poem from those first few sentences, it is very powerful. Thanks for your kind words.
so crisp. I dig the tercets–almost terse!—brevity and word choice is great, too.
…PS–content ROCKS!!! (whoopsie!)
I nominated you for an award:
http://myinvinciblespirit.wordpress.com/2013/03/13/reality-blog-award/
Thank you! It is greatly appreciated!
🙂
The haiku sequence is nice. Keeps the piece consistent and flowing. And as Charron pointed out it creates brevity.